The Finchbottom Vale is nestled comfortably between the Ancient Dancingdean
Forest to the south and the rolling Pepperstock Hills in the north, those who
are lucky enough to live there think of it as the rose between two thorns.
The Vale was once a great wetland that centuries earlier stretched
from Mornington in the East to Childean in the west and from Shallowfield in the
south to Purplemere in the north.
But over the many centuries the vast majority had been drained for
agriculture, a feat achieved largely by the efforts of famous Mornington Mills,
of which only three had survived to the present day and even those were no
longer functional and were in various states of repair and the leafy village of Pangmere was situated on the Finchbottom Road between
Mornington and Finchbottom.
It was a perfect early
spring morning in the village and the breeze stirred the tree tops and the
birds sang to the sun.
And the birds weren’t the only early risers, Charlotte Kay was lying
in bed, warm and cosy beneath the duvet, as the birds twittered in the trees
and the early morning light tried to penetrate into her bed room.
As she lay there half-awake, half-dreaming, Charlotte could hear him
through the bedroom wall as he stood in the shower and as she listened to the
splattering and splashing, she envied every droplet of water as it ran
unchecked over his naked skin.
However the root of her envy was due to the fact that she had been in
love with him since she was eleven years old and now that she was almost twenty
she wanted him with every fibre of her being.
The subject of her fervent want was Jonathon Ovenden, the elder
brother of Charlotte’s best friend Katie, who at the tender age of 18 had, to
all intents and purposes, by tragic necessity become the father of his 11 year
old sister.
Their parents were killed in a tragic car crash on the Pepperstock
Expressway during a snow storm and all of his hopes and dreams for the future
died in the snow along with them.
His plans to study engineering at University and what that might have led
to, had to be set aside in order for him to raise his little sister, so that
she at least would be able to fulfil her potential.
The early years of his enforced parenthood he was almost consumed by
his new responsibilities, running the home, nurturing Katie and holding down a
job, a menial job and far beneath his capabilities.
But the saving grace for all his sacrifice and being weighed down by
responsibility’s at such a young age was that he was a stronger person for the
experience and Katie was to become everything their parents would have wished
her to be, and he was proud of that result.
Giving up his own academic ambitions had allowed Katie to follow her
dreams and she was now at Cambridge University with Charlotte.
As she lay in the cosy warmth of her bed listening to the water
washing over him, images of his wet naked body filled her head and she felt
aroused.
Her flesh tingled and the hairs on the back of her neck stood up and
she had to start doing maths problems in her head to clear the image of him
from her thoughts.
The water stopped running and the heavy foot fall told her he had
stepped out of the shower and then she pictured his wet naked form as he did
so, and just a thin stud wall separated her from the object of her lust and
desire.
She could see in her mind’s eye each droplet of water dripping from
his torso or running freely down his skin and then she had to start calculating
again.
But it was to no avail she could see him in the towel now, wrapped
around him as she wanted to be wrapped around him.
Charlotte was lost in those dreamy thoughts of lust when the door
suddenly opened and she heard herself gasp as Jonathon walked into the room and
then she held her breath as she watched him across the room, wearing just a
towel.
The reason he walked into the room she was in wearing only a towel was
because Charlotte was sleeping in the spare room which also housed the laundry
basket and the reason he entered without knocking was that he didn’t know Charlotte
was there.
Jonathon began picking up the laundry that had been discarded in and
around the wash bin and there was always plenty of it when Katie was back from
University and even more whenever Charlotte slept over.
Charlotte and Katie had been best friend since forever and over the
years she had been a regular house guest.
They’d been back from University for a week and the washing had
already built up and this was the first opportunity he’d had to get to grips
with it because of his job.
So as it was Saturday and the girls had gone to a party the night
before and had stayed over at another friend’s place he thought he should make
a start on the washing.
As he went through the assorted jeans, T-shirts and lingerie, he began
to think how quickly time had passed by and how quickly his sister and her best
friend had grown up.
He smiled to himself as he remembered Katie’s first bra, which was of
course a purely cosmetic device when she was only twelve.
Then as she grew she went through various stages of padded
enhancements and eventually to the full cupped and underwired contraptions she
wore today.
It was the same with her pants, in the early days they were childishly
embellished with flowers or colourful characters, then they progressed through
to practical pants and then onto more sophisticated items before progressing on
to the skimpy things of lace and bows, because his little sister was a grown
woman now.
Charlotte watched as Jonathon stood across the room in the half light,
his upper body still damp from the shower, and a towel wrapped around the
lower.
He was standing sorting laundry into baskets of light and dark and as
he held a pair of pink knickers she recognised them as her own and blushed
deeply.
Jonathon held the pink panties briefly in his hand before dropping
them into the appropriate pile.
Then a red pair, then pale blue silk and followed by black lace.
Charlotte watched as he handled her knickers one pair after another
and she got more and more embarrassed.
And as Jonathon was methodically sorting through the mountain of dirty
washing he had no idea she was laying there in the gloom because she and Katie
were supposed to be sleeping over at Karen’s house in Shallowfield, some 20
miles away.
Had he known she was there he would not have entered the room especially
wearing nothing but a towel, he would have been too self-conscious.
Jonathon had known Charlotte since she was an awkward clumsy eleven
year old girl who seemed to spend her entire time either falling over or
picking herself up and showing off her floral knickers in the process.
But she was a young woman now and Charlotte was a far cry from the
klutzy eleven year old in the flowered briefs, she had grown up to become a
swan, a socially awkward swan, but a swan nonetheless.
He could never tell her that though, nor could he tell his sister
Katie how he felt about her.
Jonathon fished out the last item from the bottom of the bin, a pair
of yellow knickers with white bows.
“They’re mine” she said in her head “Oh God how embarrassing”
Jonathon smiled and dropped them in the appropriate pile and turned to
leave the room when Charlotte let out a sigh.
“Who’s that?” he asked startled “Is that you Charlotte?”
Charlotte bit hard on her lip after her sigh.
“Yes” she replied through clenched teeth
He walked to the window and opened one curtain, spilling gentle spring
light into the room.
The sunlight fell across the rumpled screwed up duvet and a shapeless
bulge beneath it.
“I thought you and Katie were staying over at Karen’s” Jonathon said
“Katie did, but I didn’t fancy it” she lied “I have a paper to finish”
She didn’t fancy staying the night at Katie’s because she fancied
Jonathon and she wanted to spend some time with him on her own, she knew that
on Saturday he would be in all day on his own so she made an excuse to Katie
and went home.
Charlotte had no other plan than to be in the house with him on her
own, she had no idea what to do about her crush.
She wasn’t even sure she should do anything if she did know, what if
he rejected her, or what if he didn’t reject her but Katie got angry.
It was not inconceivable that she could lose them both and she may
never be in close proximity to him ever again.
As he stood there looking at her he knew she had lied about the paper,
he could always tell when she fibbed, he just wasn’t sure why, he hoped she
hadn’t had a falling out with Katie.
He wouldn’t be able to bear it if they stopped being friends and he
wouldn’t see Charlotte again.
Charlotte looked up at him and smiled and despite his fear he felt a
passion welling up in him, a passion he had suppressed over the last two years
which he dare not have hoped to have acted upon until that moment.
The very appealing sight of Charlotte laying beneath the duvet with the
spring sunshine spilling through the curtain he decided that he should seize
the day.
“Well as you can see it’s a lovely morning” he said “so get yourself
up and showered and I’ll make us some breakfast”
“Ok I have time for a quick breakfast before I start on my paper” she
replied indifferently
“Oh that’s a shame” he replied “I thought I might take you out for a
pub lunch once I’ve done the laundry, but if your too busy we could do it
another time”
“Well I’m sure if I crack on I could have it finished by lunchtime”
she said coolly
“Good” he said and scooped up one of the of washing baskets
“Time to get on then”
Charlotte showered while Jonathon made poached eggs on toast and after
he had put the first load of washing on they sat in the kitchen and enjoyed an
unhurried breakfast.
“So what is the paper on?” he asked as he drained his coffee cup
“What?” she gasped
“What is the paper that you need to complete” he clarified
“Finite Mathematics and Applied Calculus” she replied
“Really?” he asked and smiled because he was pretty sure that was
actually an A level text.
“Well I’d better get on” She said heading towards the door
“Charlotte?” he called after her
“Yes” she replied looking like a startled rabbit
“It was a really nice surprise to see you this morning” he told her
He got the chores done that he wanted to do and then he got changed
and then knocked on her door.
“Come in”
Jonathon opened the door
“Its…” he began but couldn’t finish because she looked so stunning in a yellow dress with white dots.
Obviously she hadn’t spent a moment on Finite Mathematics and Applied
Calculus and she had spent the entire time since breakfast making the best of
herself.
When he saw how gorgeous she had made herself it reinforced his belief
that he had a chance with her.
She had gone to all that trouble because even with her limited
experience with the opposite sex she knew when he said
“It was a really nice surprise to see you this morning”
That he liked her as well, which just left the fly in the ointment,
Katie.
How would she ever explain to Katie?
“It’s time to go” he said at the second attempt “you look great”
So they left Pangmere
and he drove her to Dulcet-on-Brooke where they ate lunch at The Waterside Inn.
But there were awkward
silences as the two of them battled with the internal struggle on whether to
take a chance, expose themselves and risk rejection even if the reward could be
their hearts desire.
They spent a pleasant
couple of hours of a warm summer afternoon in the beer garden on the banks of
the River Brooke but had resolved nothing by the end of it.
But it was really the
fear of upsetting Katie that played heavily on both their minds.
Jonathon and Charlotte ambled
disconsolately away from the pub garden with the burning issues unresolved but
despite that neither of them wanted to call a halt to their first outing together
so Jonathon blurted out
“Let’s go into
Sharpington”
And Charlotte had no
hesitation in saying
“Oh yes what a lovely
idea”
Sharpington-by-Sea is
a traditional seaside resort complete with a Victorian Pier, seafront hotels,
crazy golf, The Palladium ballroom, well maintained gardens, promenade, theatre
and illuminations, all the usual things to have a great time by the seaside, as
well as amusement arcades and of course the Sharpington Fun Park.
Which was the first
purpose built amusement park to open in Britain, which had an assortment of
rides, like the Rotor and the Wild Mouse, The Cyclone and the Morehouse Galloper,
all very tame compared to a 21st century roller coaster but was still great
fun.
They managed to park
at the Southern end of the promenade.
“We’re a bit away from
the action but we can get the bus down to the pier” he suggested
“Would you mind if we
walked?” Charlotte asked “I’m in no hurry to get back”
“Nor am I” he said
“and it’s such a beautiful day”
They walked along the
promenade with a gentle breeze blowing off the sea and reminisced about the
times he brought her and Katie to the seaside when they were little and they
both talked about the places in the town that held special memories for them.
The Ghost Train in the
Fun Park, Sharpington Day Parades, Halloween Fright Nights, Firework displays,
Candy Floss, sand castles and paddling in the sea.
“Can we go and paddle
now?” she asked
“Why not” he replied
and they spent the next hour on the water’s edge, splashing in the waves, and
they were so totally absorbed in what they were doing that they didn’t realize
how far down the beach they had gone and when they looked up they were close to
the pier.
They looked at each
other and then the pier and then each other again
“Ice cream” they said
in unison and raced up the beach towards the steps.
Whenever they went to
Sharpington on day trips they always went to the Bizzoni’s Ice Cream Parlour on
the Pier.
With his longer stride
he could have easily beaten her but he held back to give her a chance and when
they were 10 yards from their objective they were neck and neck but one more
stride and Charlotte went head first into the sand.
“Oh God are you ok?”
he asked and pulled her to her feet but she couldn’t answer because she was
laughing so much.
Jonathon used his
handkerchief to brush the sand off her laughing face and when he had finished
she stopped laughing and they had their first kiss at the bottom of the steps
by the Pier.
It was not a short
kiss it was long and simmering after all it had been a long time coming and
when it was over they smiled at each other and he asked
“Do you still want
that ice cream?”
“Of course” she
replied “it wasn’t that good a kiss”
The moment she
finished speaking she ran squealing up the stairs, she paused at the top,
briefly to claim victory in the race but set off again towards the pier when
she realized how close behind her he was.
After ice cream they
walked to the end of the pier where they kissed again as the day drew to a close
and the most perfect day was made more so by another perfect kiss and then they
walked hand in hand back towards the car.
They were about fifty
yards from the car park and totally absorbed by each other that they hadn’t
noticed Katie Overton pull up to the kerb and park, nor did they notice her
exit the car and lean against the side of the car with her arms folded while
she waited for them to reach her.
In fact they would
have missed her altogether had she not yelled
“Oi”
They both turned
around and looked in the direction of the call and then froze when they saw
Katie standing with her arms folded and wearing a face like thunder.
“Shit” he exclaimed
“Oh God” Charlotte
thought
“So what all this
then?” she asked crossly as she walked towards them
“Well er…” he began
“It’s kind of…”
Charlotte added
“It looks to me like
you two are an item” Katie said only a yard away from them and then her face
cracked and she hugged them both
“It’s about bloody
time” Katie added and the three of them stood on the promenade in a group hug
which expressed a warm hearted beginning to their love.
It turned out not to
be a flash in the pan or a silly crush and they had many more trips to
Sharpington over the next three years, for Ice creams at Bizzoni’s, chip
suppers from Cod’s Plaice and kiss me quick hats.
But the most
significant visit was three years after they had that first kiss.
They parked at the
southern end of the promenade and walked along the beach paddling in the waves
and as they reached the steps up to the Pier, Charlotte said wistfully
“This is where it all
began”
“Yes it was” he agreed
“But that was three years ago”
“Yes but it was a
beautiful day” she mused “the most special day”
“It was but…” he began
“But what?” she asked
with alarm
“I think I can do
better this time” he said
“Really?” she said “I
don’t think so, I don’t think you could ever top that day”
“Well I disagree” he
said and knelt down in the sand and she went pale “Charlotte Kay will you marry
me?”
When she regained the
ability to speak Charlotte said yes and then he kissed her and another perfect
day was made more so by another perfect kiss.
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